tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post5601939493753334082..comments2023-06-18T09:02:20.948-04:00Comments on Changefulstorm Poetry: Stirred Watching What I Cannot Name - June 20, 2011Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-37831833860494261622011-06-25T03:30:14.918-04:002011-06-25T03:30:14.918-04:00This leaves me sad, to remember what I have forgot...This leaves me sad, to remember what I have forgotten.Colliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02685045796347978263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-52814793979093676382011-06-21T19:13:44.297-04:002011-06-21T19:13:44.297-04:00Glorious Vision , Waken the soul! Thank You,
Dear...Glorious Vision , Waken the soul! Thank You, <br />Dear NevaGenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01133742384824803437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-84086320442733389212011-06-21T08:33:31.694-04:002011-06-21T08:33:31.694-04:00We all at time need a kick in the ass to remember ...We all at time need a kick in the ass to remember what it is we fight for and live for. Good reminder Neva!the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-26391411682182328432011-06-20T21:33:14.982-04:002011-06-20T21:33:14.982-04:00Waves folding into your blooming garden; raise hal...Waves folding into your blooming garden; raise half-blooming memories of half-forgotten. With shivering shimmering arms, red paradise gives the needed light to remember and bloom again the blossoms of your heart's desire. Lady in red dances in delightful movement through her beautiful red blossoms set awave by the endless sea.<br /><br />Beautiful writing, Neva.Ronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10657229371075631107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-37625557351448968822011-06-20T20:07:10.093-04:002011-06-20T20:07:10.093-04:00"All of my wishes are buried in rooms"
..."All of my wishes are buried in rooms"<br /><br />So sad,so true.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00298956690838559770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-74190563778372127472011-06-20T15:13:08.849-04:002011-06-20T15:13:08.849-04:00neva neva neva; no one in the history of mankind c...neva neva neva; no one in the history of mankind can write like you. you are incredible in your writing. definitely not one to compete with!!!!lorilynnhttp://lorilynn101.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-59047452939162935972011-06-20T13:26:44.226-04:002011-06-20T13:26:44.226-04:00The title drew me in, as did every line and image ...The title drew me in, as did every line and image in this sensitive poem. Love it!Judith C Evanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09900422363643962837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-42849266299936686612011-06-20T10:46:20.132-04:002011-06-20T10:46:20.132-04:00This is so incredibly beautiful I don't know w...This is so incredibly beautiful I don't know wehre to begin my comment...how about one big WOW! Each word is inticately chosen and your phrases build upon one another. Such beauty and depth of emotion. I love this one!SuziCatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04025931724313344438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-70097053055811244702011-06-20T10:45:53.233-04:002011-06-20T10:45:53.233-04:00Neva you amaze me every poems...
the pictures are ...Neva you amaze me every poems...<br />the pictures are so touching .. <br />a pleasure to read. xoxensemble5https://www.blogger.com/profile/07495652688450494118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-49945357015038091572011-06-20T10:14:10.980-04:002011-06-20T10:14:10.980-04:00I agree with the comments of LauraX. She seems to ...I agree with the comments of LauraX. She seems to have deep knowledge of poetic vision and the yearning of the captive soul. Well done Neva my friend.Qamar Soomrohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05692097779750613146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-62747744760742293482011-06-20T10:13:30.796-04:002011-06-20T10:13:30.796-04:00Yearnings and longings with a remarkable imagery i...Yearnings and longings with a remarkable imagery in these verses.Juanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17079123770357962911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-37538291126252506452011-06-20T10:10:59.223-04:002011-06-20T10:10:59.223-04:00Still, a beautiful song lies within my sight
Sings...Still, a beautiful song lies within my sight<br />Sings the desire of my soul<br />Stirred watching what I cannot name<br />Inside of waves that fold<br /><br />Magnificent poem ((((Neva)))Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-16532764892227265682011-06-20T10:09:12.077-04:002011-06-20T10:09:12.077-04:00Beautiful poetry, though I had to read it a couple...Beautiful poetry, though I had to read it a couple of times to get the full majesty. Love the picture too.Mike Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02149847109691591945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-34226086442307738672011-06-20T09:36:12.404-04:002011-06-20T09:36:12.404-04:00magnificent Neva...my favorite part:
"The is...magnificent Neva...my favorite part:<br /><br />"The issue of days has now salted my fire<br />Marked its initials on my face<br />As tracks of tears I wept for blooms<br />No longer in this place"<br /><br />The garden imagery of what is concealed in the soil and also the phrase "folded waves"...all create a rich, rich poem.<br /><br />BEautiful my dear!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-12494617872014281692011-06-20T08:55:06.590-04:002011-06-20T08:55:06.590-04:00And it all comes rushing back...And it all comes rushing back...Billyhttp://bloggingpoet.comnoreply@blogger.com