tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post1810262794580948487..comments2023-06-18T09:02:20.948-04:00Comments on Changefulstorm Poetry: Making Bricks - March 07, 2011Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-4345473727416004702011-03-08T10:40:18.290-05:002011-03-08T10:40:18.290-05:00nice. i really like the 10 thousand tears....and t...nice. i really like the 10 thousand tears....and the bricks around our heart sealing up forever....great imagery...all too real...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-60835304897495223672011-03-08T07:53:14.333-05:002011-03-08T07:53:14.333-05:00Beautiful poem Neva.Beautiful poem Neva.Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08682357133636381359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-19297837687368520822011-03-08T06:49:00.010-05:002011-03-08T06:49:00.010-05:00If only you could fathom how high and how many wal...If only you could fathom how high and how many walls of bricks I built and how long it took me to first decide to put a door into them and finally just tear the walls down.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-50255546398151655952011-03-08T00:22:11.817-05:002011-03-08T00:22:11.817-05:00Beautiful words!Beautiful words!KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-15694437263419256672011-03-07T19:12:16.380-05:002011-03-07T19:12:16.380-05:00"Shadows clearly lie awake murmuring undiscov..."Shadows clearly lie awake murmuring undiscovered truths" - what amazing imagery. <br /><br />Sometimes it feels so safe behind the walls we create...but how amazing when you take the walls down and see all that lies beyond.<br /><br />Loved this poem, Neva.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-13970861591515402052011-03-07T17:22:05.124-05:002011-03-07T17:22:05.124-05:00It's as if it were torn from a page of dreams ...It's as if it were torn from a page of dreams I have been having of late.<br /><br />A cry in the wilderness to souls lost to perversion, lust, hate, greed and ego {which are the bricks we put between ourselves} to remember that He is always arms outstretched with His unconditional love.workupafusshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02274419066611147112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-71540600572667092612011-03-07T13:57:26.448-05:002011-03-07T13:57:26.448-05:00Always as much thought and emotions in your poems ...Always as much thought and emotions in your poems Neva..<br />Great poem ~~ensemble5https://www.blogger.com/profile/07495652688450494118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-15766341169613877062011-03-07T13:23:00.809-05:002011-03-07T13:23:00.809-05:00you show deep emotion in this peace neva. well pen...you show deep emotion in this peace neva. well penned.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-19473141494815438452011-03-07T13:21:58.308-05:002011-03-07T13:21:58.308-05:00this really touched me, made me cry, such depth wr...this really touched me, made me cry, such depth written in such beauty.SuziCatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04025931724313344438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-30256121824424644192011-03-07T13:02:09.995-05:002011-03-07T13:02:09.995-05:00God ... I have missed reading your beautiful words...God ... I have missed reading your beautiful words Neva ... Hope all is well -:)Bathsheba Da Silvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06048416800212481465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-13478584606274745502011-03-07T12:41:55.139-05:002011-03-07T12:41:55.139-05:00Great poem full of emotion.Great poem full of emotion.Sharihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09061475839923643804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-36319511211204314132011-03-07T12:32:08.643-05:002011-03-07T12:32:08.643-05:00Thank you for touching my heart yet one more time....Thank you for touching my heart yet one more time...<br />TerryTJF4316https://www.blogger.com/profile/08109562735605578176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-38654892457632094492011-03-07T10:42:13.948-05:002011-03-07T10:42:13.948-05:00The last stanza in particular is absolutely beauti...The last stanza in particular is absolutely beautiful, a poignant poem.Kate Smedleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15888219523388211795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-52228463114273929872011-03-07T09:53:09.292-05:002011-03-07T09:53:09.292-05:00You are a very sensitive soul, I found a touch of ...You are a very sensitive soul, I found a touch of sadness here today.Mike Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02149847109691591945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1246769190014917081.post-17509541904422901072011-03-07T09:03:44.120-05:002011-03-07T09:03:44.120-05:00Inspiring poem, not always easy to build, you just...Inspiring poem, not always easy to build, you just have to do it on rockJuanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17079123770357962911noreply@blogger.com