With memories of great beauty, you sleep like an angel
Your wings resting with a confident air
While you sail on a ship looking for blessings
Setting fire to the bridges that cross
All your cares
You play in traces of clouds where you see your reflection
Revealed in the proud winds of your dreams
Watching time fade and travel to far away places
Where beauty rests in your imagination
To be redeemed
Standing by you now, watching you peacefully sleep
I can take refuge from my own cares
As I watch, all my blessings sail in on a ship
Carrying the smile on your face
I see there
Copyright *Neva Flores @2011
Excellent, as always, Neva!:)
ReplyDelete-David
It's always good to get close to a good boat, where the winds are favorable, a worthy poem.
ReplyDeleteSimply wonderful, the power of these words transports me to the far those places. TY Neva:))
ReplyDeleteAnother 5* performance!
ReplyDeleteNEVA !!!! vos poemes sont magnifiques
ReplyDeletecelui-ci, sublime ~~
Fantastic write! The image is wonderful, too! :)
ReplyDeletea beautiful dreamer invites you into the dream -- excellent -- beautiful poem.
ReplyDeletejoanny
Perfect match- poem to image-- tight and powerful
ReplyDeletethis is tender and beautiful...my fav part is all my blessings sailing on a ship to your smile....great line.
ReplyDeleteso wonderful, I can visualise the scene thanks to your words Neva.
ReplyDeleteWonderful, says so much and makes me feel quite emotional.
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