Sunday, July 3, 2011

On the Shores of Creation - July 03, 2011



On the Shores of Creation

We would meet on the shores of creation and walk among the grasses
Embracing the beginning of wondering, while knowing of the fall
From the corners of our being we could see the very key
That fits in the places where alone comes to call

We could hear the brimming hearts drifting full of wishes and secrets
Perhaps holding treasures on winds which spun with courage
Knowing something was amiss where the sky met grace
As they asked, is this love, our eyes find so curious

Rain signs its name on our tender hands, setting fire with its touch
As a distant star sings out that there is fire in healing waters
A thousand thoughts become the body of our stories
Wherein all darkness finds the light that matters

Between seasons, moments held hands with what is and can be
And I believe that perfection sent messages to you and me
When we met on creation's shore to walk in grasses
We were held in the arms of our own destiny

Copyright *Neva Flores @06/28/2011
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26 comments:

  1. AlisonJuly 3, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    Beautiful poem!

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  2. Mike PerryJuly 3, 2011 at 9:39 AM

    Meaningful creation - beautiful.

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  3. jean garrisonJuly 3, 2011 at 10:45 AM

    very pretty...love it..as always.....

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  4. JuanJuly 3, 2011 at 11:01 AM

    For love, the world was created, and this overwhelming poem shows .

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  5. ensemble5July 3, 2011 at 11:20 AM

    Really beautiful Neva ..

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  6. emmett wheatfallJuly 3, 2011 at 3:27 PM

    Lovely Neva, lovely!

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  7. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerJuly 3, 2011 at 3:56 PM

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  8. UnknownJuly 3, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    Thank you to everyone who has commented on today's post.

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  9. BillyJuly 3, 2011 at 6:06 PM

    "moments held hands with what is and can be"

    Love that line!

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  10. Jo BryantJuly 3, 2011 at 8:17 PM

    Rain signs its name on our tender hands, setting fire with its touch

    wow - lovely

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  11. GeneJuly 3, 2011 at 9:08 PM

    Elegant, yet mesmerizing ,Lady Muse, Thanks for your Touch! Bravo

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  12. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerJuly 3, 2011 at 9:22 PM

    Lovely, lovely work Neva!

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  13. SusannahJuly 4, 2011 at 7:40 AM

    "A thousand thoughts become the body of our stories
    Wherein all darkness finds the light that matters

    . . . wonderful! :-)

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  14. UnknownJuly 4, 2011 at 11:54 AM

    This is lovely. Your word choices are equally dramatic and romantic. I find it interesting that you and I wrote of creation at nearly the same time, although in very different manners. http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/07/02/in-the-beginning-kim-created/

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  15. tarunimaJuly 4, 2011 at 3:17 PM

    lovely flow of words:)
    I truly enjoyed this:)
    thanks for sharing neva.

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  16. Poetic SoulJuly 4, 2011 at 8:07 PM

    You are a creative person, your word play is amazing. You are a creative person, your word play is amazing.

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  17. VictoriaJuly 4, 2011 at 8:15 PM

    The mysticism of this poem entrances me - "shore of creation" is a concept I love, and arms around destiny too.

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  18. JingleJuly 4, 2011 at 8:22 PM

    very poetic and dreamy words.
    cheers.

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  19. Jingle PoetryJuly 4, 2011 at 8:23 PM

    welcome share your work with our poetry potluck today,

    your talent rocks.

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  20. morgannaJuly 4, 2011 at 9:59 PM

    Wow. Very moving.

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  21. DasuntouchaJuly 5, 2011 at 12:31 AM

    Captivating piece of writing.

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  22. Brother OllieJuly 5, 2011 at 7:49 AM

    This has a really dramatic tone. Cool style!

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  23. TimoteoJuly 5, 2011 at 7:57 PM

    What I like about your work is the unexpected, the unanticipated word that lands like a raindrop upon my parched poetry soul!

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  24. AnonymousJuly 6, 2011 at 3:27 AM

    Such a beautiful, enthralling poem. It's art

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  25. AnonymousJuly 6, 2011 at 8:40 AM

    Perfect as ever Neva

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  26. PathLessTraveledJuly 15, 2011 at 11:17 AM

    The images transport the reader to a primorial place and time and fills ones consciousness with wonder and the exploration of possibilities . . . Good writing -- well appreciated.

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