Sunday, December 19, 2010

Subtle Ray - Dec. 19, 2010



Subtle Ray

The secret of your smile glows like gold on the dreams I dream
In the darkest places, your voice is a silver-lighted sound
Millions of others can see your smile agleam
Yet not know, this happiness I've found

Embroidered moments of pleasure entwine around my heart
While the brightest moon shines silently above
Ever wide is the subtlest ray you impart
When you smile, I can feel your love

Your voice is a shining echo that claims my constant heart
I will always treasure each word as a precious pearl
From the moment, first light of dawn imparts
Still, when all light leaves this world

Might I ever go searching for your smile to gild my day
Your voice to light the darkness in my heart
Embroidered in the riches, only you can send my way
With the widest subtle ray, your smile imparts

Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
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15 comments:

  1. JuanDecember 19, 2010 at 9:30 AM

    Giving all loving, enough with the smile of the beloved one, sweet poem.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 19, 2010 at 9:47 AM

    Lovely poem. Stunning illustration. Neva, do you do your own artwork? You do seem to have the touch. The new blog design in perfectly wonderful.

    Jamie Dedes

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  3. moondustwriterDecember 19, 2010 at 10:17 AM

    Beautiful Neva
    the smile that guides dreams
    the love that keeps one captive
    a true treasure - like a pearl it is hard to find

    thanks for your sweet words

    Moonie smiles

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  4. joannaDecember 19, 2010 at 10:30 AM

    Neva

    This was sublime! You wove a beautiful rich tapestry of life and love. The art work is fantastic.

    Joanny

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  5. AnonymousDecember 19, 2010 at 11:26 AM

    oh my, i love this one. love the word you used, "embroidered". this one is a winner neva.

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  6. Mike PerryDecember 19, 2010 at 1:18 PM

    The images you create with words are just wonderful - lovely art work too.

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  7. Monkey ManDecember 19, 2010 at 1:41 PM

    Beautiful work. I know that smile.

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  8. ClaudiaDecember 19, 2010 at 3:08 PM

    ..your voice is a silver-lighted sound.. i like this very much - there's so much in a voice that can make our heart beat faster..beautiful

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  9. GeneDecember 19, 2010 at 5:27 PM

    Beautiful vision penned here of the sound of a voice or the smile of a loved one can bring Joy to the heart.
    Thank You Wordsmith! Beauty as always from the Heart.

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  10. emmett wheatfallDecember 20, 2010 at 1:43 AM

    Your words are forever lovely, Neva. They give us hope for the things we who truly love live for. Neva, you so inspire me with your work.

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  11. KBDecember 20, 2010 at 2:11 AM

    A sunny smile does us all the world of good.

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  12. Glynis Peters December 20, 2010 at 2:21 AM

    I have just spent a pleasant few moments reading your work. Beautiful.

    Thank you for your Christmas wishes on my blog.
    May I in turn, wish you a Merry Festive Season and a Happy, Healthy New Year.

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  13. AnonymousDecember 20, 2010 at 10:16 AM

    love your new blog,
    timeless work..

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  15. BBBDecember 20, 2010 at 3:04 PM

    Such a sweet, sweet poem! :)

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