Monday, December 20, 2010

To Impress - Dec. 20, 2010



To Impress

Delicate nets collect on sailing clouds of violet mist
While red leaves twist and spin in turn
Gleaming sparks of dawn cannot be dismissed
As the scattered night sky
Is adjourned

Sweet water gathers in a dream's own reflection
On a whirling spider's silvery thread
Morning has broken needing no authentication
See her truth glowing there
In an intricate web

Tiny stones are surrounding sharp blades of grass
Worshiping the presence, they behold
Looking up from the shadows of a looking glass
With their own stories
Still untold

A leaping bass, splashes proudly in a silent pond
Each drop of water expressing its distress
Thinking that the sun was waiting to respond
To his shimmering silence
Used to impress

A single drop of water, a red leaf twisting in the wind
A spider weaving her web to be blessed
Even the tiny stones worshiping their friends
Leap with the bass, distressing the pond
To impress

Copyright *Neva Flores @2010

11 comments:

  1. Sleepless, in beautiful nature shape .

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  2. Nature is impressive to the soul...this is beeautiful Neva! :-)

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  3. All of the World wishes to impress The Sun ,Impressed in a dream ;-)
    Good for the Soul .
    Great Read, Neva

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  4. Absolutely beautiful, colorful, and deep. THis is my favorite part "

    Tiny stones are surrounding sharp blades of grass
    Worshiping the presence, they behold
    Looking up from the shadows of a looking glass
    With their own stories
    Still untold" You have such an incredible gift of the poetic mind.

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  5. A very peaceful, beautiful engagement with nature here, Neva. Your reflection of the world in this looking glass is one of tranquil majesty, which reaches deeper than the surface of that pond...giving much to explore. Lovely.

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  6. What a marvelous miniature world you've created here, Neva!

    I want to thank you for your recent lovely comments at my blog, and simply for visiting and reading. You are welcome anytime. :-)

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  7. i am impressed as well!!

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