When You See the Sunset
Wherever you have gone before, nothing can compare
To these wings you defiantly wear
Your flushed cheeks are flooded with silken tears
Falling on a heart without fear
You love life more when you can see the sunset
As an open invitation to forget
Everything which you know in fact to be true
Wandering deep inside of you
You say there is nothing blooming within your air
So these wings you must wear
Yet underneath it all you find you cannot fly
Fearless, in an unknown sky
Wherever you have gone before, matters not to me
Everything you are inside, I can see
I love you more than life itself, so do not forget
What is true, when you see the sunset
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
Bravo! Very much like the idea of sunset being a invitation to forget. Yes!
ReplyDeleteNeva I like this very much. with a few changes I would assume it was directed at me.
ReplyDeleteNever seen a sunset in this way before - another lovely read.
ReplyDeleteWell stated! :)
ReplyDeleteI love this beautiful poem Neva !!
ReplyDeleteSeeing the Sunset as a release makes each day a New Day. Clean slate to move on and grow .:-)
ReplyDeleteThank You, Neva!
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It is a beautiful poem and seems a very good start to the new year. Washing the slate clean.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year.
Maggie X
Nuts in May