Friday, March 18, 2011

In Comes No Reply - March 18, 2011



In Comes No Reply

You fade away into silent raindrops leaving emptiness inside me
The time you should never doubt, comes to remain
If any good should come near it would only be a sting
In places where I meet more than I know
You are kind, I will give you that

I can see where no reply comes creeping in, a knife wielding thief
You will recognize her by how tall she stands
Wishing your reality would not sleep within these places
Is not always the wisest way to know her lips
You best be singing a delicate song

One hand fails to fill the cracks of everything we've been through
While life performs for unbreakable hearts
You fade away leaving nothing but emptiness inside me
Now who will protect me when I think no reply
Is softly calling out my name

There are seasons still looking for truth to be what it calls itself
So go ahead and rearrange all your doubts
Keep wishing your reality will form into shapes that sting
I will take this emptiness from more than I know
Leave a kiss on no reply's sweet mouth

Copyright *Neva Flores @2011
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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 18, 2011 at 9:09 AM

    Well done!!! Hugs!

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  2. JuanMarch 18, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    Impressive verses that flows by and questions to keep lit the flame of love.

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  3. Teddy Dragon BearMarch 18, 2011 at 10:36 AM

    touching

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  4. Mike PerryMarch 18, 2011 at 10:44 AM

    Once more you have encapsulated so much between the lines.

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  5. nonameMarch 18, 2011 at 11:38 AM

    very touching poem...beautifully written
    Annamaria

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  6. AnonymousMarch 18, 2011 at 1:17 PM

    Take heed, A vivid impression within this message deserves a reply...Thank you Neva,
    yet again,an amazing poem

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  7. Andy48March 18, 2011 at 1:32 PM

    Let me add my own bit of praise to this. wonderfully done.

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  8. emmett wheatfallMarch 18, 2011 at 4:03 PM

    Agreed. This poetic message needs a reply.

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  9. signed...bkmMarch 19, 2011 at 2:15 AM

    a sweet kiss on no reply's mouth...that is a line to think about...bkm

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  10. Kentucky RainMarch 19, 2011 at 1:50 PM

    If you don't have a book of these you should. Just magnificent and awe inspiring.

    johnnyRedfox0

    AKA: Michael J. Scott

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  11. Deb RMarch 20, 2011 at 10:38 AM

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  12. AnonymousMarch 21, 2011 at 5:17 AM

    Parfait
    x

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