My Beginning
I broke the spell on my own, though its reach was far and wide
Even when you hid your face in your hands
I learned to sing louder
Until I had turned
The tide
I wondered if you ever thought of me or one kiss I gave to you
When you read all the words I wrote
Did they burn like pouring salt
Into an open wound
Of truth
I took a look at the coldest smile and found the warmest heart
Standing clear of the picture and its owner
Thought I broke the spell on my own
As I watched your fingers
Come apart
From a straight drop of a thousand feet, I found the spell's ending
Then tried to hide my heart in my own hands
But you only learned to sing louder
Until you had become
My beginning
Copyright *Neva Flores @2011
Song of metamorphesis...
ReplyDeleteI love the second stanza in particular in this beautiful poem Neva.
ReplyDeleteWow. Powerful imagery in these verses.
ReplyDeleteWhen you read all the words I wrote
ReplyDeleteDid they burn like pouring salt
Into an open wound
Of truth....
What a wonderful turn of phrase. love it love it
Marvelous conjunction of events in the story of a romance in a haunting poem.
ReplyDeletei am with Me on my fav line...and what a fall there in the end...
ReplyDeleteyou have me under your spell when i read your poetry.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery.
ReplyDeleteQuite refreshing Neva. A great read.
ReplyDeleteThe beginning always the best part. "I PARTICULARLY LIKE THAT PICTURE!"
ReplyDeletePerfect all the way through!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!, always a pleasure to read !!! Neva..
ReplyDelete