Sunday, January 23, 2011

Where the Willing Waits - Jan. 23, 2011



Where the Willing Waits

I carry the sun in a song to a land, where lovers can never forget
How to slip in between existence through unlocked doors
If you would listen to the murmur of this tale
You would leap first to hear the words
And ask for more

Take my hand and swiftly run through the sky of a hundred spells
Listen to my voice softly define the land and sea
Come and follow me in between existence
And we will slip into those doors
No need of keys

We will roam far away to where the willing waits to hear a song
Upon the paths where love resounds quite forgotten
If they will listen to the murmur of this tale
They can slip in between existence
With abandon

We will carry the sun in a song to a land, so lovers never forget
How to slip in between existence and reality
Enter into doors with no need of keys
Resounding words of love
From land and sea

Copyright *Neva Flores @2011
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18 comments:

  1. Kate SmedleyJanuary 23, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    'Take my hand and swiftly run through the sky of a hundred spells'- yet another stunning poem
    Neva.

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  2. JuanJanuary 23, 2011 at 9:12 AM

    Souls who come together for a single destination, encouraging poem.

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  3. NewellJanuary 23, 2011 at 9:16 AM

    This is a very sophisticated philosophical idea.
    Namely, consciousness (i.e.the home of love) lives between the poles of the think mind.

    Extordinary! Brilliant!

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  4. Mike PerryJanuary 23, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    Wonderful poem. To me suggests a parallel existence. Newell, in the comment above, writes, "Brilliant!" - I have to echo this.

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  5. Glynis Peters January 23, 2011 at 12:37 PM

    You have so much talent. Beautiful.

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  6. BBBJanuary 23, 2011 at 12:37 PM

    A fantastic write, Neva! :)

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  7. Monkey ManJanuary 23, 2011 at 1:36 PM

    Beautiful flow and I love the way you patterned this visually. Just WOW!

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  8. NessaJanuary 23, 2011 at 1:47 PM

    Very mystical and emotional.

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  9. GeneJanuary 23, 2011 at 2:55 PM

    Poem and Image ,Magical Tapestry, woven words to reach the soulful Lovers,Beautiful,Neva.

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  10. signed...bkmJanuary 23, 2011 at 4:09 PM

    Entering the door with no need of keys....beautiful image of a mystical place...bkm

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  11. TJF4316January 23, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    So very powerful and tender at the same time....

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  12. LauraJanuary 23, 2011 at 5:22 PM

    "We will roam far away to where the willing waits to hear a song
    Upon the paths where love resounds quite forgotten
    If they will listen to the murmur of this tale
    They can slip in between existence
    With abandon"

    how I do love this! So beautiful Neva!

    "slip between existence..." LOVE it!

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  13. phyllisJanuary 23, 2011 at 6:42 PM

    ROMANCE DEFINED AND DESCRIBED, IN WORDS THAT FLOW LIKE SILK THROUGH THE MIND

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  14. Brian MillerJanuary 23, 2011 at 6:58 PM

    neva this is gorgeous...keep singing that song...smiles. laura nailed it with my fav line as well...

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  15. KBJanuary 23, 2011 at 7:57 PM

    Wonderful poem!

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  16. moondustwriterJanuary 24, 2011 at 12:53 AM

    magnificent piece - if only this could be reality

    this inspired a poem from me - will probably post for OSW

    I think good poetry does just that - inspires

    Love from the Moon

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  17. AnonymousJanuary 24, 2011 at 4:39 PM

    "We will carry the sun in a song to a land, so lovers never forget
    How to slip in between existence and reality
    Enter into doors with no need of keys
    Resounding words of love
    From land and sea". love the conclusion of this piece.

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  18. signed...bkmJanuary 26, 2011 at 11:45 PM

    Beautiful Neva...as everyone has stated before I can only agree and I love the words "where the willing waits"...those words took hold of my heart...thank you...bkm

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