Power of Chance
I cannot forget the light that falls from your loving glance
Or what a lovely miracle love can be
Such a sweet mystery lies within the power of chance
For those who choose not to forget
What they see
Do we walk among the stones of life in a forever quest
Seeking the fragrance of a perfect rose
Blaming fate or chance, refusing to be blessed
By the perfume of the glance
Under our nose
Are we frightened by the fire we meet on our path
Wave away the smoke in distress
Forget the loving glance because of the wrath
Thinking what is not perfect
Cannot be blessed
I will not forget the light that falls from your loving glance
Or the lovely miracle our love holds
Such a sweet mystery lies within taking a chance
For those who choose to face the fire
Not run or fold
Copyright *Neva Flores @ 01/11/2011
Superb - for those who choose not to forget.
ReplyDeleteParadise is here, and perfection is an illusion that is what I get from your poem, great message, congrats
ReplyDeletenice...i like the challenge and i am ready to face...
ReplyDeleteA wonderful message! :)
ReplyDeleteI cannot forget the light that falls from your loving glance - that's a beautiful line; I like the repetition of it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful indeed!
ReplyDeleteOh Neva this one is...is...magical and full of grace. Yes, acceptance and grace.
ReplyDeletethis is beautiful and i guess sometimes we ARE frightened by the fire we meet on our path..
ReplyDeleteBesides your stellar poetry is the artwork above your poems. They enhance, compliment, and beautify your work. Love it.
ReplyDelete"Such a sweet mystery lies within taking a chance
ReplyDeleteFor those who choose to face the fire
Not run or fold", perfect ending.
Tempting offer, burn or not burn, as always fascinating metaphor
ReplyDeleteOh but you do ask good questions.
ReplyDeleteBeing brave enough...yes...that's the important part to loving.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...
A mystical image starts us onto a lovely poetic path - bravery and fire and mysteries all.
ReplyDeleteA sublime poem --- spiritual sensual poetry---- a journey to discovering the self through others and events right in front of oneself, Every day miracles and inspiration already given if one just takes the time -- stunning & well written poetry.
ReplyDeletewarm wishes,
joanny
Yes we must stand and face our fears.
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