Thursday, January 20, 2011

Unwritten - January 20, 2011



Unwritten

Give me warmth in a close and quiet port with a song unwritten
So when the wind unveils her pride I will not know
I will dive headfirst into uncharted waters
Write the words to the song
With my harp of gold

Send me a reason to leave my warm and quiet port with you
So when the wind unveils her pride I will stay warm
We will dive headfirst into uncharted waters
With a new song unwritten
In both our arms

Promise me I will not long for the song unwritten I wrote alone
When I leave my warm and quiet port to write for you
Then I will dive headfirst into uncharted waters
Write the words to a new unwritten song
You can sing too

Our song will hold a thousand nights of memories of bliss
To keep us warm when the wind unveils her pride
We will sing each word together in harmony
While we dive headfirst into waters
With our warmth inside

Copyright *Neva Flores @2011
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14 comments:

  1. Kate SmedleyJanuary 20, 2011 at 8:27 AM

    Stunningly beautiful words Neva.

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  2. JuanJanuary 20, 2011 at 9:03 AM

    Charming poetic images dedicated to one beloved

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  3. Maggie MayJanuary 20, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    Not only are the words beautiful but the verses look so good too, being symmetrical.
    Maggie X

    Nuts in May

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  4. Brian MillerJanuary 20, 2011 at 10:07 AM

    this is a beautiful song you have written...may it continue to be written in your life...

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  5. Mike PerryJanuary 20, 2011 at 10:40 AM

    Wonderful, a meditation of love.

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  6. GeneJanuary 20, 2011 at 11:09 AM

    Beautiful write You have given in Heartfelt Love. To hear the words to a tune We Hum. Harmony.

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  7. Andy48January 20, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    As always, you post something beautiful and touching.

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2011 at 1:57 PM

    gosh, what a beautiful song. i can just hear it. stunning neva!!

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  9. phyllisJanuary 20, 2011 at 5:37 PM

    sensual--- can feel the music of this--

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  10. Bobcat999January 20, 2011 at 7:18 PM

    this is great....

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  11. Cindy1128January 20, 2011 at 9:32 PM

    Beautiful, poignant and very inviting!!

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  12. joannaJanuary 21, 2011 at 2:09 AM

    Love the title and the photo,, , the poem is a gorgeous testament to love --- for the heart is longing for that soul mate that words cannot describe but only experience -- just stunning, hope that is your love "unwritten" with that special person you so eloquently penned.

    joanny

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  13. the walking manJanuary 21, 2011 at 4:48 AM

    The only promise worth accepting is the one that says I will never willingly leave you.

    Yes ma'am you are definitely moving up my personal charts of favorite contemporary poets.

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  14. NessaJanuary 21, 2011 at 3:28 PM

    Lovely. I especially like the phrase "the wind unveils her pride."

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